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Life's a Bloody Playground

CONTENT: 40/45

Some of your entries were so funny, I really enjoyed reading your diary. I loved how you reacted to your family's infatuation of your fish. I laughed out loud at the moral of your yummy dream, "Thou shalt not have wild sex in your Gran's empty house!" - haha. I also really enjoyed your creative writing. I like that you include links to your stories and fanfiction and I enjoyed reading them. You're a great writer! I also really liked your entries for "Pieces of You" and "Sex in the Suburbs."

The entries that were basically day-logs were the least interesting. I sometimes had a hard time staying with you, but you mention yourself that you have nothing to say - you just keep writing. My advice would be to try to only post when you really have something to say. Some entries started out as a day log and then you added other interesting content. For example, the Father's Day entry sounded like you would just recount the day, but in fact you had a lot to say about your dad and church. Anyway, I know I also fall into the posting-just-because-I'm-bored-and-have-nothing-else-to-do rut, BUT, it's way more interesting on the days you dont do that!

PERSONALITY: 25/25

I think you did a really good job expressing yourself. I felt like I really got to know who you are as a person. I liked that you express your passions through your entries, like in your 'Dear John' letter and your analysis of your dreams.

EXTRAS: 10/10

You have an extras page and plenty of goodies.

CONTACT: 10/10

You have a guestbook, email, notes, and yahoo messenger name. That's good enough for me!

LINK: 10/10

You have a functioning link on your extras page.

COMMENTS:

Overall, I really enjoyed your diary. The 5 points off were for losing my attention some of the entries, but that's not a huge deal because you still got a good score! I also love your layout. I'm not into the whole vampire thing, but I think the picture is beautiful and the rest is simplicity, so it's great. Well done. I definitely could relate to you, I'm also in college. Actually, I'll be a senior this year, but I couldn't find a summer job either! HaHa. Good luck in school in the fall and I'll definitely check in to see how you're doing.

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Score: 95/100

Reviewed on 2003-08-05 at 12:09 p.m. by Midge