hopezspark

magick wishes

CONTENT: 42/45 You voice what you feel here , here, here, and here. I love the way your words are flowing together, and you maintain a consistent path through your entries.

EXPRESSION/PERSONALITY: 17/25 I love your expressions and deep emotions. What i noticed, though, you tend to drift on in swear words, and the writing deteriorates. Maybe if you tried not so hard to swear, your real thoughts can come through far easier than they are now.

EXTRAS: 6/10 Lots throughout the diary, however, an organized bunch can be set if you only add them directly on each page. That way, they're all available simultaneously.

CONTACT: 9/10 a tagboard might be nice, too.

LINK: 10/10 the buttons there, on your review page.

TOTAL SCORE: 84/100

COMMENTS: Take these comments and improve your style. Enjoy the Ruby Ring. You're a great kid with nice people in your life. That gets you a long way, girlie.

Score: 84/100

Reviewed on 2003-08-04 at 6:32 p.m. by Nafia