wontlookback

like.you.care.

CONTENT: I hate to critique because of grammar. Sometimes it's easy to read, sometimes it's jumbled all together. What's "strach?" (here). Other than that, it is good content, however it's not something someone would read if they wanted to cheer up, ya know? Work on the grammar, be a little organized ;) (37/45)

EXPRESSION: You express yourself with a lot of "I'm confused," "fuck this shit," among others. You do let a lot out while you're typing. I bet your keyboard is bashed up. You do explain a lot of your anger, but you rarely write when something is good. Write about the good of your day, even if it is that you woke up and got on with yourself. Be happy =) (19/25)

EXTRAS: I liked your quizzes page. You're a nerdslut? Marry me. Good stuff. (10/10)

CONTACT: No e-mail, maybe make it a little easier to find things like your notes, profile, etc. (9/10)

LINK: Ya think? =) (10/10)

SCORE: 85/100

COMMENTS: Try to perk up! Be a little more optimistic :P On that note, join the ruby ring =)

Score: 85

Reviewed on 2003-08-25 at 11:14 p.m. by Stebo