pyrostorm

Has anyone found happiness yet?

CONTENT: To start, I really enjoyed this entry. Very true! I think that when we try too hard to achieve a goal, sometimes, we become our own worst enemy. Like when trying to lose or gain weight: the moment you stop obsessing about it, the smoother it seems to go! At least, that's been my experience! The next entry was good, too. I like how you summarized all the lousy things that happened to you, and then say...you're not bored, at least! It was just the way you wrote it that tickled me! This was a great entry, too! Overall, well done!

Content Score: 45/45

EXPRESSION/PERSONALITY: You have a really neat way of expressing yourself. Your entries don't seem to be way long, and I like that. You are able to express yourself without having to write for five years before getting to the gist of things. Good for you! I really thought that this entry was great! You have a way with words that is very entertaining. Don't change!

Expression/Personality Score: 25/25

EXTRAS: Rings, (one of which I joined, and joined Rare Silk, Quiz Results, Imood, GFY, (also sent an email to join that! Too good to be true!), list of favorites, and so on. Well done.

Extras Score: 10/10

CONTACT: Notes and email. A guestbook is not necessary. As long as you are contactable and the links aren't broken, you get full points.

Contact Score: 10/10

LINK: Wow! It's on the home page...twice! Thanks! Works, too. Takes me, well...here!

Link Score: 10/10

OVERALL: I really enjoyed your diary. It's very much you. You are not pretentious, and you are not trying to impress anyone; you simply write for yourself. In this process, you have found a good writer's "voice", and are very entertaining! You may join the Diamond Ring. You will also be listed as one of our favorite diaries, and on our Rare Silk Diaries page. Good job!

Score: 100/100

Reviewed on 2003-08-11 at 10:38 p.m. by Leslie Irene