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Pending List ~ sazzle182 This truth drives me into madness CONTENT: LOL. I liked your Tomb Raider entry. See, when reviewers are rude like that, that's just pathetic and that's a lame excuse for reviews. Your entries pretty much recap your day and all that other good stuff. The other reviews that you have gotten do stress grammar. There are a few points where your grammar and spelling aren't up to snuff. Work on that a bit (maybe run your entries through spellcheck, that always helps), but the actual reading of the journals are great! (35/45) EXPRESSION: You hold nothing back, even though your diary is a locked one. It's good because you don't cut short anything for the readers. It must've been hard to tell Julie that you were bi. How old are you exactly? (25/25) EXTRAS: Intersting, I like the "adoption" program. Bonus to ya. (11/10) CONTACT: Stalk you? OK! (10/10) LINK: Bingo. (10/10) SCORE: 91/100 COMMENTS: Your text runs into your sidebar, and it's kinda hard to read. Maybe wanna fix that ;) I also like the idea of the Power Web Music, but I loath popups. Other than that, enjoy the emerald ring =) Score: 91 Reviewed on 2003-09-01 at 10:51 p.m. by Stebo |