CONTENT: (42/45) The early entries have 3 main subjects: How the day went, Chris, and your template. There's nothing wrong with that as long as there's some break in the cycle occasionally, which the later entries accomplish nicely.

There are a few laughs in the older entries, like here, here, and here.

The entry about making dinner coming just before the drink recipes kinda leaves one wondering.

Your more recent entries seem to have a wider variety of feelings expressed in them, when you don't have a cold. Still, it's better to have a moderate entry once in a while than to have random one-liners every day.

The cat with the green lemon peel helmet was priceless.

EXPRESSION: (22/25) There were just enough spelling mistakes to get annoying in the older entries (I'm not talking about the standard spelling differences between American English and the Queen's English). The more recent entries don't seem to have any spelling problems.

Your personality comes through much stronger in your more recent entries, even in the ones that are more centered on Chris.

EXTRAS: (12/10) Reviews, Cast, Bio, 101 facts, rings, Avatars, Who is list, ABC list, Slide show home tour, quizzes, drink recipes, and links. Rather busy, but very well organized.

CONTACT: (12/10) Guestbook, Tag board, guest map, email, notes, AIM, ICQ, MSN, Yahoo.

LINK: (6/10) In reviews page. Not using link button.

COMMENTS: Your diary is quite good. The only improvement I can suggest is trying to find something interesting to say during those days when there doesn't seem to be anything interesting happening. Changing focus to a single event and describing how it effects you can be enough for those situations.

You may join the Emerald ring.

SCORE: (94/100)