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taraleebaby

taraleebaby

CONTENT: (40/45) Your diary seems to be a very detailed event-log. It's full of your memorable events and how you feel about them. There are times when you tell of feeling depressed, and others when you describe feelings of love or joy. While you never seem very clear about whether you're writing for an audience or for yourself, that adds something personal to your writing. Not a bad read, but not necessarily for everybody.

EXPRESSION: (25/25) No spelling or grammar mistakes aside from the occasional use of short-speak in the chat log entries (no points off for that). Your personality comes through fairly well. After reading through, the bits that you censor make sense.

EXTRAS: (10/10) Imood, bio page, quiz page, reviews page, link to Frozen Kiss.

CONTACT: (10/10) Guestbook, notes, email, AIM.

LINK: (6/10) In reviews page. Did not use link button.

COMMENTS: While your diary is quite good as it is, if you want to attract an audience you will need to add something. Humor or your oppinions on debatable topics would be enough.

You may join the Emerald Ring.

SCORE: (91/100)

Score: 91

Reviewed on 2003-11-30 at 2:15 a.m. by Daniel

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