pretty-june

::I.Heart.You::

CONTENT: Wow! You update about three or four times a day...there certainly is a lot of content as far as volume is concerned! Oh? Could this be poetry? If it isn�t then I�m sorry, but I liked it, it was deep and pretty, and I always give bonus points for poetry. You talked here about the scars on your wrists from having cut yourself in the past, and you seemed proud of them. So you know, that�s kinda scary, I�m glad you can open up like that in your diary, say things you know others won�t like but it�s still scary. Here is an example of what so many people do: they ruin perfectly good diaries with conversations that nobody gets the context of, so they never get read anyway. It is your diary, and so you should put whatever you want in it, but your writing has been much more thoughtful and deeper then an AIM conversation up to this point. Your entries show a lot of emotion, but they lack detail and context, so any reader who isn�t one of your friends can�t really understand what you�re talking about. Also, the frequent lack of caps and excessive use of [[[ and *** for separation got kind of annoying. (35/45)

EXPRESSION: You do show a lot of emotion and express yourself. You say what is on your mind, and you don�t hold back from what others may think of you. Though you never really wrote a lot, you almost always had something to say that was worth saying. (20/25)

EXTRAS: Emotions (right now), past diaries? (or at least links to other diaries), picture, and a site counter that I almost didn�t see (5/10)

CONTACT: Guestbook, email, notes, and AIM (10/10)

LINK: It�s there and it works. (10/10)

TOTAL SCORE: (80/100)

COMMENTS:Trying getting a few more extras, rings, profile, and fans are always easy to use, they�re basically free points. Also, trying writing with more detail, it makes a reader from the outside feel much more comfortable with your style. You are a good writer, keep it up. You can also join the ruby diaryring!

Score: 80/100

Reviewed on 2003-08-26 at 3:31 p.m. by Renee