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Pending List ~ clevertwist Content: I like your writing style, but you used a lot of third person in your entries. It's not that this is a bad thing, although it did get kind of tiring.You wrote some times short entries-maybe one sentence long- but these were my favorite. You really got to the point and made most sense when you wrote the shorter ones. I really liked this entry and this entry. I give you a [40/45]. Personality/Expression: You showed that you were a lonely person for the most part. You had a few humorous entries like this one. I wonder also what the heck is up with American Pop culture. I couldn't really grasp what type of person you were on a whole. [15/25] Link: It's there! [10/10] Contact: You have a guestbook, notes, and.. that's about it.[5/10] Overall: You had a really good diary. I like it for the most part. There was one entry that really stood out for me and is was about TRUST. I have a huge trust issue and I feel like I really got into your diary at this point. I really liked it. clevertwistScore: [70/100] Reviewed on 2003-08-18 at 4:33 p.m. by Annie |