kerrierw

++Bruised Petal++

content: 35/45

expression/personality: 20/25

Link: 10/10

Extras: 11/10

contact: 7/10

Comments:

I was incredibly impressed with all of your extras and loved your poems. Please keep writing, because you've gotten a new fan!

Most of your entries are day-to-day things and thats good, to a point. Perhaps you should have rants, song lyrics, more writings, just something to catch the reader's attention more. You had pretty good grammer, but a lot of the time you don't capitalize and spelling is a bit off at times. (Yes I did take into account the fact you are in England, and didn't take off for that because that would just be stupid), so I had to take off a few points. I did enjoy your diary though, and keep it up! Also... don't worry about people finding your diary. This entry is very true, but sometimes you can't worry about people finding it. If thats what you really want, you can change diaries.. but I'd like to know your new one just because I love your poetry and would love to read more. Don't stop writing.

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Score: 83/100

Reviewed on 2004-07-15 at 1:57 p.m. by Jo