nazgul--girl

From the ashes a fire shall be woken

CONTENT: 36/45 I was impressed and amused by your life; it's just your overinfatuation with Lord of the Rings that disintegrates your writing. Perhaps if you contemplate more on your lfie and not the LOTR so much, your diary can be improved dramatically. All in all, i find it as stimulating writing.

EXPRESSION/PERSONALITY: 13/25 I like this one. Your voice shoots through and it's well expressed. However, the problem is here. You don't really express fully why or how you feel the way you do. You see, readers want to know you. The real person behind the glitz and glam of writing. You can fully show yourself in the writing in your diary.

EXTRAS: 7/10 Besides a couple of quizzes, your fanfic, and links betweek the pages, i'm not seeing anything extra. Try a cast page, a quizzes page, a poetry page, etc.

CONTACT: 10/10 You've got it, nice work.

LINKS: 10/10 Found it alright.

TOTAL SCORE: 76/100

COMMENTS: Keep at it, girl. You can definetly shake thinggs up a little, but do have fun. Later days, chica.

Score: 76/100

Reviewed on 2003-08-06 at 2:28 p.m. by Nafia