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CONTENT: (33/45) This is what a personal diary is intended to be. The thing is, after reading the whole of your diary, I still don't have a good feel of who you are. I have a good idea of who the other players are in your life from this, but there's little on what makes you happy, what brings you peace, or what makes you laugh.

EXPRESSION: (25/25) Love, hate, frustration, lonliness, anger, fear, and pain; those are here. All very clearly expressed. All with a good, firm grasp on the language. Your writing did improve a bit in the later entries. There wasn't much to improve on, because the first entries were almost technically flawless. Your entries seemed more mature tward the present as well.

EXTRAS: (10/10) Bio, To Do, Cast, Playlist, rings, and Reviews pages.

CONTACT: (10/10) Notes, E-mail, and AIM. A guestbook or tag-board would be a good addition, but not a neccisary one.

LINK: (9/10) In reviews page. Didn't use the graphic button.

COMMENTS: The drama is a little thick, especially in the earlier entries. There's nothing wrong with that, it's just not my thing. A little humor can go a long way, even dark humor.

Remember that this is not a judgement of you, just one of your written diary.

Original layout- bonus points +2

SCORE: (89/100)

Score: 89

Reviewed on 2003-11-04 at 6:04 a.m. by Daniel

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