I wanna feel infinite

CONTENT: You have a mature outlook on life. Your earlier entries describe in detail your thoughts about God and Christianity, and this makes your entries compassionate and intriguing. I thought the first entry was very thoughtful and sad at the same time. However, your entries seemed very long, and I feel they need to be broken up a bit more. Maybe it's the layout and the small text box, and it would seem better if the box was bigger and the text was larger. Still, I do like the way you write, and the way you express yourself. Still, that belongs in the next section really..
35/45

EXPRESSION/PERSONALITY: You express your opinions and feelings very eloquently. Like I said, I loved the first entry not for the sombre theme, but for the way you put across your feelings. It is sad that you dread your birthdays like that, I wouldn't wish that on anyone. Still, that and other entries show your maturity of speech and that is to be commended. Well done.
23/25

EXTRAS: A bio, review page... There could be more. Cast page perhaps?
4/10

CONTACT: Notes. How about a guestbook and email on there too?
3/10

LINK: Yep, on the links page.
10/10

TOTAL SCORE: 75/100

COMMENTS: Your writing is good, but your layout was a little distracting and doesn't show it off to its full potential. Perhaps consider that and a few more extras and methods of contact.

Score: 75/100

Reviewed on 2003-09-08 at 9:05 p.m. by Nicola