nutmegoli

nutmegoli

moving right along...

CONTENT: 35/45

you did a good job with everything...but you had a lot of multiple entries at first and then none since 9/26, so i took off points...then i saw this and it said that you had deleted past entries, but i still can't grade on that...

EXPRESSION: 25/25

in particular i liked this entry...

EXTRAS: 2/10

basically none, but i didn't want to hurt your grade just because you had a diaryland layout or something...

CONTACT: 2/10

your diaryland email address...

LINK: 0/10

i'm sorry, didn't find it...

COMMENTS:

it seemed like your diary was just an outlet only meant for a short time to record your thoughts, but you also did say that you had deleted entries. your poetry was good. good job, but it didn't really seem like you wanted/needed a review. but nice writing, and it seemed like a good way to express yourself.

TOTAL: 64/100

Score: 64/100

Reviewed on 2003-11-03 at 7:48 p.m. by Arhanti