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try and catch a falling star

CONTENT:I first want to apologize for taking so long to review your diary, but honestly it was worth the wait for me. I think, despite the fact your entries tell about your day a lot, you present everything in a rather intresting fashion. You don't hold back on how you feel, and your share your life with your diary, with your readers, and that's exactly what a diary is for. I really got pulled into how you felt about David, and other things going on in your life. I didn't like, however, how you only capitalize names, and you don't even do that 100% of the time. I know you can write, but the best writers really do concern themselves with sentences structure and grammar, and in that dept. you were a little bit lacking. All in all, very enjoyable to read. (42/45)

EXPRESSION:You use your diary like a diary should be used, which may not seem like that's a big deal, but a lot of people don't open up enough because they're afraid of others judging them. I understand that a lot of people have friends who read their diaries (like me, which is a shame) and it seems like you have friends who read your diary, and you're not afraid that they read it. You do have a distinct personality and you seem very genuine. (24/25)

EXTRAS:Profile, rings, links, cast, reviews, imood, and random surrealism generator (neat!) (10/10)

CONTACT:Email, notes, and guestbook (10/10)

LINK:It's there. (10/10)

TOTAL SCORE: (96/100)

COMMENTS:Great diary, I really enjoyed reading it. You can join the emerald diaryring, and you'll be added as one of our favorites!

Score: 96/100

Reviewed on 2003-09-21 at 12:35 a.m. by Renee