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deadendmoon

deadendmoon

And Heaven Is Near

CONTENT:First, it took me forever to figure out what the "next" and "prev" links were�the alias' you have for them don't let on anything. You write about things that happened to you that day, you write a lot about songs and songs you have stuck in your head. For the most part, I never really got into your diary, but by all means it wasn't too bad. You had a lot to say, but in general there wasn't anything to deep or emotional. I'm glad you didn't try to force that sort of thing, but this is your diary, and you shouldn't just write about what you did in a diary, but also how you felt, and what you're thinking. Not bad though, this entry is more of what I like to read. (32/45)

EXPRESSION: Not a large amount of expression, but a definate personality. You seem very comfortable with your diary, you aren't fake, and you have a lot to say. (19/25)

EXTRAS:Links, reviews, links, cast, playlist, profile, likes/hates, imood, poetry, 131 things, and a few more. (10/10)

CONTACT: Guestbook, tagboard, notes and email. (10/10)

LINK: Yep. (10/10)

TOTAL SCORE: (81/100)

COMMENTS: I like the picture in your template, I love music, and one of the many instruments I play is the flute. You can join the ruby diaryring!

Score: 81/100

Reviewed on 2003-09-06 at 8:02 p.m. by Renee

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