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Disobey || Emily the Strange

CONTENT: You basically write about your day, which is oaky, but I found things were hard to follow because I'm not familiar with your friends names (try making a cast page) or too much else about you. I was really waiting to read some serious emotional entries, although I didn't find any. It's okay to write daylog type diaries, but I really which I could have gotten to know you better, and gotten a chance to see what you're feeling on the inside, not just what's going on outside. Also, some grammatical errors like lack of caps. usage. (20/45)

EXPRESSION: You don't really have a distinct expression or personality, nothing jumped out at me. Try writing for you, not for any of your friends that might read your diary, try just opening up and telling everyone how you feel about anything. Your thoughts don't always have to be deep, but tell your reader how you feel about where you work or where you go to school, tell me more about you. (10/25)

EXTRAS:Profile, aboutme/loves/hates on main page, and a buddylist (4/10)

CONTACT:Email, guestbook, and notes(but they're not turned on) (10/10)

LINK: It's there. (10/10)

TOTAL SCORE: (64/100)

COMMENTS:You have a good start to a diary. Try writing more and using more detail, and find some more extras to throw in to keep your readers busy. The more original you are with extras, the more people are likely to keep reading.

Score: 64/100

Reviewed on 2003-09-21 at 5:23 p.m. by Renee